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Feb 17, 2014 1:41 PM #1160179
since i was going to do with more 3d and angle effects.i stopped to do 2d long time ago.
i feel this are not bad,but a little bit strange.like no sfx.
but good movements.sorry if my cnc is bad
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Feb 17, 2014 1:44 PM #1160181
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nahhh, c'mon. Just do some CnC dude

It's lacks of ease on the second anim, when the stick smashed the ground. Your run is good though. And don't forget about physics dude. I suggest you to watch fight science. The moves there are so fakin' ossum!! And there's some slowmo too.
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Feb 17, 2014 1:45 PM #1160182
CnC's (Click to Show)

Thx, both of you. @cpt4dji, I usually don't use SFX on short practice, but I think I'll do it.
@Andrew thx too dude
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Feb 17, 2014 1:48 PM #1160186
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Thx, both of you. @cpt4dji, I usually don't use SFX on short practice, but I think I'll do it.
@Andrew thx too dude

Uhh, what about mine?
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Feb 17, 2014 1:51 PM #1160191
sry, i post it lately and don't want to get anymore infractions. So... thx for the Cnc and yeah.. i knew it.
1 word
EASING
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Feb 18, 2014 2:57 PM #1160811
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long time not touching flash, i mean animating.
Here's some unrusting with decreasing skill.
http://sta.sh/01d1k4a99dlh
http://sta.sh/05gneszckj4
CnC, pls. Especially you S21-P

Not bad for a beginner really! Keep experimenting and practicing and you'll be great because I see potential!
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Feb 20, 2014 10:16 PM #1162004
Hi Scar!


http://www.filz.us/29q1 Run
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Mar 2, 2014 11:24 AM #1167954
Hi Hoya. I'm really new to animating so I feel like I shouldn't be taken too seriously. But here's my two cents. I think that if you made a larger hurdle, it would be easier to see the motion of jumping. I think the stick could have just as easily run above the rock because of how small it is.

Here's mine. Anyone can have a go at it. I didn't think I'd end up posting it so I had to blurb out the bad word. (I'm assuming we aren't allowed to use foul words.) It's my first animation ever, but I don't mind if you want to say everything that's wrong with it.
http://www.filz.us/view/8d9fad27-183/
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Mar 4, 2014 9:49 PM #1170370
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Hi Hoya. I'm really new to animating so I feel like I shouldn't be taken too seriously. But here's my two cents. I think that if you made a larger hurdle, it would be easier to see the motion of jumping. I think the stick could have just as easily run above the rock because of how small it is.

Here's mine. Anyone can have a go at it. I didn't think I'd end up posting it so I had to blurb out the bad word. (I'm assuming we aren't allowed to use foul words.) It's my first animation ever, but I don't mind if you want to say everything that's wrong with it.
http://www.filz.us/view/8d9fad27-183/

Thank you for your input. All comments are valued. =)

For your anim, it's not bad for a first, although I don't understand it. I liked the dog part, the angles were believable. You seem to have some grasp of quadruped animation already. Some parts were choppy; to prevent this make sure there aren't any frames where an image goes back over the onion skin (the transparent gray repeat of each frame, make sure you have onion skin turned on.) Example.This of course is exaggerated.
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Mar 8, 2014 9:19 PM #1172803
All I had time to animate this week was a two step walk, so it's hardly a walk cycle. Most of the time I could use was spent trying to figure out how to work things. CnC is still appreciated, however.
http://filz.us/2bbv

EDIT: I ended up making another one during work. I actually ended up staying late because I really wanted to finish it. It's terrible, but I'm slowly feeling a bit more comfortable with the software. I'm trying to mimic the League of Legend spotlight by Hyun on Youtube for practice. I only ended up doing the first few seconds of the video, and later I'll mimic his fights. I'm not doing it frame by frame though... as you can probably tell. The start up run is super slow, I was animating it at 24 frames per second, and I thought I needed more frames-- but I put way too much. Anyways, here's the link. CnC it all you want. http://www.filz.us/view/9ba16d25-a3c/
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Mar 16, 2014 4:59 AM #1176017
hi guys i have 2 weeks from i started with flash,any way this is my vedio
http://filz.us/2by2 :p

EDIT: and this is anather one its a fight << http://filz.us/2byv >>
i have a prob with the moving and panching at the same time idk how to fix that :(
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Mar 16, 2014 5:28 PM #1176242
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hi guys i have 2 weeks from i started with flash,any way this is my vedio
http://filz.us/2by2 :p


The first animation is very good! Fluid and well-timed. However, at the start of the animation the stickfigure comes into the frame very fast, then stops moving, then falls down. A better way to do that would be to make him fall as he comes into the frame in an arc shape because gravity.

Other than that minor issue, it's a very good animation for two weeks of experience. Keep up the good work! :D

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Anyway, here's an animation I made a few weeks ago. The sounds might lag the first time around - play the animation again and it should be fine. I don't really know how to fix that - any help would be appreciated on that front. :)

And here's a bonus animation from 2012 that I found on my hard drive recently. I had no idea I was that good back then... O.o
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Mar 18, 2014 5:02 PM #1177191
I am new with animating in Flash
A kick( http://filz.us/2bGR ) i not very good, because i have to practise :/
pls C&C
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Mar 19, 2014 5:16 PM #1177631
I got flash :D so it's time to terrorize you all with something other than pivot now
also... this is just my second flash animation evar... so
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Mar 19, 2014 8:00 PM #1177667
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I got flash :D so it's time to terrorize you all with something other than pivot now
also... this is just my second flash animation evar... so
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finally awesome dude
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