Quote from Awesomesuperfreak

This is my thing i made in like an hour (it is also my first thing i EVER made in flash)
http://imageshack.com/a/img853/8041/vg4.gif

sorry to say this,but your pic wasn't even moving. :(

and btw,
http://sta.sh/01vl820vx21q
i'm trying reactions.
CnC is appreciated.

This is the first proper animation I made, please cnc :)

Quote from Putri

This is the first proper animation I made, please cnc :)

that fire looks like a falling meteor lol.and the sticks are woobly.try double framing :)
but that looks awesome for first animation. :)

Quote from Putri

This is the first proper animation I made, please cnc :)

Your stick figures is wobbly, try to fix that. Other than that, Looking great! Did you make that back ground? That's cool!

Thank you very much! I may haven't fully understand the construction of stick movement yet (he was supposed to turn around when throwing like a pitcher).
Since I posted it, I've been making next scenes and I think my understanding is getting better. I will finish several more scenes and fix that before posting update ;)

Quote from Stallion

that fire looks like a falling meteor lol.and the sticks are woobly.try double framing :)
but that looks awesome for first animation. :)

Well, this is the first proper animation I made XD not really first-first, yet I am still newb. My actual first when I tried flash some months ago was rubbish I don't bother posting it here.

Quote from S21-P

Your stick figures is wobbly, try to fix that. Other than that, Looking great! Did you make that back ground? That's cool!

Yup, I made the background! If this project of fire vs water goes well, expect more awesome (at least challenging for me) changing scenery in later time frames.
I may will still updating at this thread instead of making a new one until about 25-50% complete. (Hopefully when 50% complete and when no more basic technique thing like this needs repair). Thanks for the C'nC XD

Quote from Putri

This is the first proper animation I made, please cnc :)

Love that background ^^

Wobbliness fixed! Thanks for the Cnc, plus new scenes for you!
Click the image




Wobliness: I resort to tween since I can't get it right through frame per frame, the stickman looks somehow less enthusiast though XD but this is the best I can do
Stallion, I embraced your impression that the fire looks like meteor, thanks a lot! Please keep the Cnc coming!

The water bending looks sketchy, but I want to make it my style, how do you guys think?

HORY SHEET SIS,YOU'RE THE NEW DanmarK ! :OOOOO

i can't really say anything,but your sticks are moving slowly :O

The first stick? Yeah, I can't really do anything better about him I've given up, let him just move slowly ;) as for the second stick (3rd scene, right?) he was supposed to be in some kind of slow-mo, doesn't seem like slow-mo :P?

Yup, I've been tinkering around flash since January, but this is the first time I do something more than 1-2 seconds XD

How did I learn that? Hours and hours of watching the making of fl vs pulse over and over again... among random other things

Edit: Oops, I forgot to mention that I am 22y and has been drawing (hobby) in traditional pencil (I like hatching, thus the idea of putting it into animation), so even though I'm new to flash it might not be that surprising XD

http://www.filz.us/view/72d34419-af4/
Sort of my comeback animation or whatever. CNC

Quote from Outcast

http://www.filz.us/view/72d34419-af4/
Sort of my comeback animation or whatever. CNC

man,your sig is funny xD
for the animation,you should make the jumps slower,especially the second jump.

Btw,
http://sta.sh/0dznkjlf2w2
CnC.

http://dylanjimmyirwin.deviantart.com/art/Clan-Weekly-3-447921366
cnc plz

Quote from captain4dji

http://dylanjimmyirwin.deviantart.com/art/Clan-Weekly-3-447921366
cnc plz

First of all,for the replay button (it's irrelevant,but i hate it), you could just use:

on (release) {

	gotoAndPlay(2);

}

Instead of :

on(release){

	play();

}

because it would play from the second frame,instead of the first frame.

for the animation,you need to add more exxageration,i think. :)