@ Sweet- Good job for a first really. Ok work on the size and the head seemed deformed. The body was too small. Use the line tool before using the brush (my opinion anyways)
Work on the background. I thought the land thing was bad. Good Luck animating.
Can someone tell me how to get the flash animation software? I'm sorry I thought it was free. Everywhere I looked it cost something. Please, someone help me. :(
The whole animation was very choppy, try to make the size of the sticks consistant. When he fell the leg jerked up and down, keep on practicing and you will get better. Use onion skin next time so the size is consistant and add more frames so the animation is less choppy.
wtf why can't I view the animations it comes out as a little thing in the corner , anyways why doesn't anyone comment here then you get pissed of when we make a new thread about our stick figures
Matt24, the stick was wobbly so work on that, try useing the onion skin.
It was smoother than your previous one so good job on that, although it was pretty short, next time make a longer one. Work on the blood and the beam, they were not very good. Look at some tutorials at newgrounds or right here at spp.
Please be patient, you cant expect people to comment right after you post a animation.
Bam-s13, try to host it somewhere else because its takes way to long to load.
Edit: Nevermind its just the first link
@bam-s13- The gun was very good nice job. Work on the knock-back.
-The blood tests were pretty good. Work on the stick for the second one.
@matt24- The first one was pretty choppy and the legs were short. The second one was decent work on your blood. Also work on how he shoots his beam it looked awkward.
Prety good china man. It was animated pretty well but it was choppy. Looked like the legs were kinda like that old show i used to watch when i was a kid. "Stickin around". Lol.
