Quote from mr.mcstick

Ok with the kick straighten everything out more and get rid of one of the frames while he's doing it for more force. The only other thing I see is the jump might need a little more crouch in it other then that good job. (Time to go investigate it FBF lol jk)

Yeah, i tryed that with the kick, but then it stopped looking like a kick :/ And what do you mean by straightening everything out?
and Moch12- definitely watch the resizing. And the flip happens way too fast. The whole thing takes about 2 frames. When someone does a flip, they begin flipping much more towards the beginning of the jump. Always imagine yourself doing it before you animate it.

Quote from mr.mcstick

Ok with the kick straighten everything out more and get rid of one of the frames while he's doing it for more force. The only other thing I see is the jump might need a little more crouch in it other then that good job. (Time to go investigate it FBF lol jk)

Yeah, i tryed that with the kick, but then it stopped looking like a kick :/ And what do you mean by straightening everything out?
and Moch12- definitely watch the resizing. And the flip happens way too fast. The whole thing takes about 2 frames. When someone does a flip, they begin flipping much more towards the beginning of the jump. Always imagine yourself doing it before you animate it.

Hey guys I haven't used flash in a while(was using easytoons) anyway so I tried a punch but was focusing more on re-sizing I think it had a little but still good also C&C on punch and re sizing. http://www.truploader.com/view/973612

Actually, I think you have a good, solid, punch, Darkcloud. The only thing that I'd suggest changing is the legs are a tad wobbly and maybe give him a larger follow through. Otherwise, good job.

Not bad. He shouldn't travel so far to the right at the arc of his jump though. The rest is aright.

Darkcloud legs are wobbly landing and jump are awkward he should slow down in air not speed up
DOC I mean straighten out the limbs

thanks and damn with the brush it's ****ing impossible to not have something wobbly.

Here is a little walk cycle

http://www.truploader.com/view/182758

any tips on making it less wobly?

http://filebox.me/view/kjrq2qauq

its decent but kinda lame bout guy girl kissbut watev pls give me tips

Added on to my walk cycle

http://www.truploader.com/view/597925

Edit: Started making a punch but it turned into a rushed combo, any tips?

http://www.truploader.com/view/536599

This is my first animation in flash \o/

http://filebox.me/view/5cdg959ii

the walk cycle looked pretty good, not sure what else to say to it. the punch looked alright. first kick doesn't look like it's swinging at an imaginary target in front, like the other two swings, but look alright to me. try adding an opponent now.

foshizzle: ease it a bit, add more changing frames to the move cycle. and is it meant to suddenly stop in the center? if so, start slowing it partway across the screen.

fish: not bad, keep at it. not really sure what to suggest to improve it. a little bit more easing, perhaps?

ok so, after 2 months of non-computer-touching, today i've started a new anim. here you have the link, thanks for comments.


http://www.truploader.com/view/202544