Quote from Lars

http://www.swfup.com/file/65282

My last short animation, just need a bit comments on
the blood and movements.
(Kinda rushed it.. like 10minutes of work, got school right now) =(

It's okay, but when u make slow-mo don't double framing on more. Just make more frames but all other, It just looked bad

Quote from Draco'X

http://www.swfup.com/file/65289

First succesful walking cycle. Swfup slowed it down, etc.

Non-biased critiscism, go.

I think it's nice and smooth but isn't he's knee go to up?

Karthago, your sig is kai and I like it. I think now u should wokro n some more details.

ty for c n c ... the problem with the details is that theyre pixely if i size it all to 100x100

Quote from Cai Johnson

I think it's nice and smooth but isn't he's knee go to up?

Hmm, I'll fix that.

EDIT:
http://www.swfup.com/file/65551

Fixed the arms' reactions and tweaked the knees.

Hey Draco, for some reason, i want you to make that a repeating walk and then add that song by the the BeeGees-Staying Live

"i can tell by the way i use my walk, im a woman's man, no time to talk"

lol, anyway, it would go great with that walk, lol, it was bouncy and dancy, but cool...

nice walk draco, smooth, nice.

nice walk.
Can you look at this its my part for a collab but its very unfinished.
i need help on what im doin wrong i might quit the colab because
i think its sucky http://flost.shiftlimits.com/file.php?id=9ca44839

Your calling that sucky? That looks alot better than my mania in the works! It's great!

erm tell me whats the name of that collab?

i think its not that bad... a resizing problem is there...

its Flash Revival anti-destroy Collab

and what rank am i ??

can i get Some comments and a rank heres my anims
http://www.swfup.com/file/63846
http://www.swfup.com/file/64505
http://www.swfup.com/file/64653

(each is better then other... i think)

Real critiscism now guys, I'm trying to improve here, and you're not helping.

@ Draco-Work more on smoothness and i know it's hard to do with line, but just try, but yeah, it was a bit bobbly, just work on a standard walk, go to the mall or tell a sibling to walk around a lot, lol

@SSS-add more frames on run, too hard to see what was happening, should just stick with basic movements and learning on how to now resize, use onion skin if you don't

@Second Sight- Wasn't too bad, but make his legs longer, legs are always longer than the torso, that's all you need to work on, sticks a little wobbly...

Quote from Draco'X

Real critiscism now guys, I'm trying to improve here, and you're not helping.

if you cant get advices, watch your anim yourself and think about how it would look like in the reality... stand before your mirror and make movements, study them, if you have to: make a vid and trace the movements to get them really...

im not good at ranking...

Here's an anim of mine





Its rushed... just posted nothing for a long time and wanted to end that =)

Yeah, that is a decent walk rightz zhere, but yeah, i like it, arm movements though would be nice, but not too much, lol, i like it, do some more