Don't get mad at a C&C. Who said it was bad?

it wasnt called "bad" but the mainthing they disliked is the particles and i did put much effort into it ...

whatever.. yay i will work on everything!
and btw: that bowanim is from my time as mouseanimator i just added particles

Quote from Karthago

http://www.swfup.com/file/74375

PLEASE C AND C

particles were pretty good the d streched out looked like crap though

http://www.swfup.com/file/74535 Theres a combo animation right there for ya

Quote from madhatter666

particles were pretty good the d streched out looked like crap though

erm... that wasnt ment to be a "D" it was ment to be a bow!

but how i just said: it is an old anim from my mouseanimatingtime :D

EDIT:

Quote from SoulEater

http://www.swfup.com/file/74535 Theres a combo animation right there for ya

too curvy again -.- work on stickdrawing and giving the hits force (maybe you should use the vcam)
hope i could have been of help

EDIT: got to go now... its 23:40 here in germany ... good nite at all!

http://www.swfup.com/file/74551 C&C please

Quote from iregger

http://www.swfup.com/file/74551 C&C please

It was choppy, make more spacing
It lacked force, make the kick one frame, or two, depending on the Framerate
COol down, the kick stops after about 3 frames, make it slowly loose speed and come down, not instantly, with a huge force, it would be impossible to stop it right after impact.
Good try, but keep at it.

Quote from .ALEXEH

I liked the blurs on the arm but the rest was choppy.
and grubber is right, you're kick and punch lacked force and easing.
nice for beginner.

Ok i'll start on that now

here is my avatar/blood test/physics test :D
CC please

work a lot on easing and physics. There was resizing on the legs, and the arms barely moved.

yes i argee with devour

http://www.swfup.com/file/74619 practicing walk.

it was smooth and a little wobbly.....also i dont like ur style of stick but that is just my opinion

Quote from SoulEater

http://www.swfup.com/file/74619 practicing walk.

Good, you listened to my advice. Now the run looks more realistic because you removed all of that unneeded easing. You're getting better. Keep practicing.