Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Dec 13, 2007 12:27 AM #71623
probably my smoothest animation yet. all blood by me, cept for the face shot.

http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs22/f/2007/346/4/2/smooth_by_terix01.swf
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Dec 13, 2007 12:31 AM #71624
The sound effect was a bit off. It came after the blood.
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Dec 13, 2007 1:03 AM #71632
Than you 0mega, i am glad i got some good feedback from you, i'll be sure to do some more, and yeah, tablet.
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Dec 13, 2007 4:59 AM #71652
Well i haven't animated in a long time and I wasn't good to begin with XD. But I'm just going to post a test i worked on.
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=4607
Credits to Devour for the help:Happy:
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Dec 13, 2007 5:41 AM #71654
Stick was ugly. Stance was bad to start with. Moar and smoother anticipation. Blur is not necessary. The fall and physics were bad. Keep it up. You can get better. Always study other animations and tyr putting the way they do it to your own.
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Dec 13, 2007 12:30 PM #71661
Orbb why you still post in beginners section? i think you are far away out of here
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Dec 13, 2007 12:46 PM #71662
http://www.swfme.com/view/1242662

-till the bitter end.
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Dec 13, 2007 12:50 PM #71663
karth it looks really good...u have improved quickly...i think u can start post outside of the beg sec now :D....only complaint about the movie was that the dues arms were a little weird when he was walking :D
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Dec 13, 2007 12:57 PM #71664
Quote from Karthago
http://www.swfme.com/view/1242662

-till the bitter end.


It was good, work on the background. And how you draw your sticks, smoothness like 30-40.

And see some walk tuts

Keep practising ^^
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Dec 13, 2007 12:58 PM #71665
thanks... i posted this three times to get comments ... that sucks^^

yeah the one arm was ment to look like hes creeping because the other guy is asleep... didnt really work... i will try more

EDIT: WOAAAAAH i can do him walk good but this ****ing was ment to creeeeeeeep! >:-(
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Dec 13, 2007 2:19 PM #71667
Just work on walking and on bg.
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Dec 13, 2007 7:11 PM #71673
well i got some tips from sith whos like, one of the best flashers ive ever seen, he gave me some tips on how to animate sticks, and ive made i test using what he gave, i didnt redraw the stick, aloha, looks like a hula or something i dunno.

http://www.swfme.com/view/1067222

kinda sucks IMO.
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Dec 13, 2007 7:23 PM #71674
why he is shaking his ass like a chick?
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Dec 13, 2007 7:24 PM #71675
its a hula thing, wait i shouldve added a skirt made of grass, damn
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Dec 13, 2007 7:50 PM #71677
What ?
Links,maybe.
Try this:

www.
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