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pixmantle
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Nov 23, 2012 2:11 AM #795067
Here's my first stick figure walking animation.

http://www.fileize.com/view/8ae28d11-790/

It took me a really long time to get the arms okay, there's probably resizing in there somewhere too, but oh well, good enough. I feel the strong need to start making something action oriented, but I need sounds first. Could someone suggest any ways I could get more sounds to use? Or a good program for creating sounds easily? The footsteps sound okay, but too much like farts to me.
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Nov 23, 2012 2:17 AM #795070
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stiff and needs more easing
other than that its fine
Quote from pixmantle
Here's my first stick figure walking animation.

http://www.fileize.com/view/8ae28d11-790/

It took me a really long time to get the arms okay, there's probably resizing in there somewhere too, but oh well, good enough. I feel the strong need to start making something action oriented, but I need sounds first. Could someone suggest any ways I could get more sounds to use? Or a good program for creating sounds easily? The footsteps sound okay, but too much like farts to me.

you need to not lean your character forward as much as you are.
also, hes moving too fast for a walk. I mean, speed walking looks odd even in real life, hows it gonna look with stickfigures?
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Nov 23, 2012 2:21 AM #795075
i made this and would love it if someone would look at it and respond
http://sanjae101.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d5kbl8g
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Nov 23, 2012 4:31 AM #795187
http://www.fileize.com/view/c5ec83d1-fac/ This is my first real animation I've made. I'm fairly satisfied with the outcome. :D Some things I can already point out, the rolling is kind of unnatural and I got kinda lazy at the end, so the guy doesn't fly as far as he should.

I'm curious, though; I've already made two posts before this. Both of them had to be approved by an admin. I'm not sure why. It's not that the admin has not gotten to my post to approve it yet, because posts have been made already, and then there have been responses to those posts. Is it because of my account age? It's too young? Or maybe it's the link I'm using? I've been using an image hosting site that I usually use, but now I'll use this website and see if it's any different...
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Nov 24, 2012 3:34 AM #796080
Hmm, heart pounding action can wait then, for I must rebuild a glorious walking animation!

I'll make you proud Drone! :O
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Nov 24, 2012 3:39 AM #796085
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Hmm, heart pounding action can wait then, for I must rebuild a glorious walking animation!

I'll make you proud Drone! :O

xD and you should stable the height of your stick it looks like it's shrinking.
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Nov 24, 2012 4:24 AM #796127
Don't worry! I'll make you proud drone and Neospelet! :O
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Nov 24, 2012 4:52 AM #796165
CnC on this one?
http://www.fileize.com/view/b0c546df-625/
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Nov 24, 2012 5:18 AM #796189
All right, here it is, the culmination of a million generations of work: http://www.fileize.com/view/94a5ec9e-ad4/

Now criticism or no, I am going to make some super cool fight scenes, and weapons, and backgrounds, and UP UP AND AWAAAAAYYY!
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Nov 24, 2012 6:02 AM #796216
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more frames inbetween, its pretty choppy.
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All right, here it is, the culmination of a million generations of work: http://www.fileize.com/view/94a5ec9e-ad4/

Now criticism or no, I am going to make some super cool fight scenes, and weapons, and backgrounds, and UP UP AND AWAAAAAYYY!

getting better, now its just a bit wobbly, try to work on that.
dont spend too much time on it though, its discouraging for a beginner
youll get it eventually
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Nov 24, 2012 6:07 AM #796222
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getting better, now its just a bit wobbly, try to work on that.
dont spend too much time on it though, its discouraging for a beginner
youll get it eventually


Dayum straight! :D

*EDIT: Do you know where people get the common pool stick figure sounds? Is there a sound board I need or something?
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Nov 24, 2012 6:13 AM #796228
Okay, this is my last try. Instead of quick-reply, I clicked the "Reply to Thread" button. I've submitted three posts so far and none have gotten through lol. What kind of forums needs your posts to be verified by a moderator? But nobody else's posts need to be approved, since posts have been getting responses. Idk what's wrong with my account, or my posts.

Anyways, this is my first real animation. http://www.fileize.com/view/c5ec83d1-fac/ I got kind of lazy at the end, the guy getting hit doesn't fly as much as he should.
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Nov 24, 2012 6:26 AM #796240
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Dayum straight! :D

*EDIT: Do you know where people get the common pool stick figure sounds? Is there a sound board I need or something?

well, the way I got my sounds are people either giving them to me, Terkoiz's gift video on youtube, or stones sound thread.
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Nov 24, 2012 6:30 AM #796242
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well, the way I got my sounds are people either giving them to me, Terkoiz's gift video on youtube, or stones sound thread.


Bless yo heart!
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Nov 24, 2012 6:30 AM #796245
http://www.mediafire.com/?u43ojleotn6pl#dwufz9t5nho4c

All of Pepper's sounds are here. They're great and there are tons of them. Check it out, and bookmark it.
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