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AlphaMan
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Nov 24, 2012 12:51 PM #796526
That is LOT of sounds.
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Nov 25, 2012 1:26 AM #797141
Hey all! My first post and first animation. Please give me some critisim!
http://www.fileize.com/view/d6a18a27-454/
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Nov 25, 2012 2:57 PM #797833
I got stone's sounds anyway, Im not that good
http://www.fileize.com/view/a759dddf-e77/
CONSTRUCTIVELY ctiticise
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Nov 25, 2012 10:36 PM #798223
Quote from jdogg
http://www.mediafire.com/?u43ojleotn6pl#dwufz9t5nho4c

All of Pepper's sounds are here. They're great and there are tons of them. Check it out, and bookmark it.


Tnx alot jdogg! I was looking for this ever since rebellion told me that you can get all of pepper's stuff on mediafire.
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Nov 26, 2012 3:50 AM #798533
http://www.truploader.com/view/645588
So this is something I've been working on for a bit. Open to criticism. Haven't figured out how to add sound because I'm a genius.
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Nov 26, 2012 2:57 PM #798886
Quote from Imada
I got stone's sounds anyway, Im not that good
http://www.fileize.com/view/a759dddf-e77/
CONSTRUCTIVELY ctiticise


you can't really tell what he's doing when he gets down there. he just lands and wobbles and they fall down. inconsistent speed as well.
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Nov 26, 2012 3:33 PM #798905
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Hey guys there ya go my first decent animation so far: http://www.fileize.com/view/8be3304b-dcf/
Haven't worked on sound and reactions yet. I've tried doing reactions but it turned out very badly so I deleted it because i ran out of days on my flash trial.
Any constructive criticism is much appreciated :)


It looks like my post took some time to get approved so it got skipped.
Another thing I noticed, my animation seems to look more smother when swf. is run in gom in contrast to running in a browser.
Any thoughts: http://www.fileize.com/view/8be3304b-dcf/ ?
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Nov 26, 2012 11:17 PM #799164
Ok, I posted awhile ago and it took awhile to get approved, so it was buried under everything else lol. I found out that it was because I didn't have a lot of posts, but I think I should have enough now, so ima try again.
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This is my first real thing I've done in Flash. What can I improve on? I know that I got a bit lazy at the end, the guy doesn't fly as far as he should lol.
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Nov 27, 2012 8:55 PM #800094
@Chips: it looks good, but it's called force! i need to see that force transfered to another body!

@Loginid: that looks good. a bit slow, and you break up the action a bit too much with the long steps and movements
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Nov 28, 2012 3:39 PM #800852
@EmoCat: Amusing animation hahah, you should work on your stickman physics. Some parts are completely unrealistic.
@Loginid: Please make the stickmans bigger next time, I believe nobody likes pressing their noses against the monitor :)
@Max: Working on it!
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Nov 29, 2012 4:35 AM #801435
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@Loginid: Please make the stickmans bigger next time, I believe nobody likes pressing their noses against the monitor :)


ahah yeah, I was thinking about messing around with V-Cam a bit but I thought they were big enough without it so I just left it there lol.
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Dec 3, 2012 7:40 AM #805749
My very first animation --> http://www.fileize.com/view/c20454fe-602/
The 2nd one --> http://www.fileize.com/view/c8a169de-5c6/
:)
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Dec 4, 2012 5:58 AM #806606
http://www.fileize.com/view/c487caf8-8a1/
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Dec 5, 2012 1:04 AM #807461
http://filz.us/b9T
Cnc?
I don't think I improved much in the past months.
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Dec 6, 2012 10:43 AM #808739
The combo! :D
http://www.fileize.com/view/d6552f76-929/
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