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Jul 19, 2009 4:53 AM #462766
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actually, if he thickens the body(which i did)the head wont appear as big


yeah, that has worked for me.
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Jul 19, 2009 8:23 AM #462818
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Image Ok i made my own sticks, and here is the finished product!

Okay, now make another stickman that has arms and legs longer. It was really stiff, and the legs movements were wrong.

I'd recommend to make the ground stick more thick.
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Jul 19, 2009 10:43 AM #462863
heres my new animation Image
it sawks? D:
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Jul 19, 2009 11:12 AM #462866
this is my first backflip useing no tut plz tell me wats wrong
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Jul 19, 2009 11:41 AM #462874
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this is my first backflip useing no tut plz tell me wats wrong

looks fine but its too stiff
work on easing lolll
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Jul 19, 2009 11:49 AM #462877
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heres my new animation Image
it sawks? D:

It lacked easing, and few physics were off.
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Jul 19, 2009 11:53 AM #462883
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verry good job at the 3d effect and try to learn easing
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Jul 19, 2009 11:55 AM #462885
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verry good job at the 3d effect and try to learn easing

i allways forget to ease D: *head-desk*
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Jul 19, 2009 12:33 PM #462894
Sina:

Firstly, welcome to Sp.

Before you learn easing, you need to correct your movements. Easing doesnt make badly animated animations look good. No matter how well you ease, the animation will still look crap if you have shitty movements.

Bad things i can see with you animation include:

The run was slightly jittery
He did a spin kick but the rest of his body didnt spin.
The gun is jittery.
You used downloaded .stks.
Other stick was stiff when he was kicked.
His legs land awkwardly.

Good things:

Text was nice.
The red eyes looked great.
It had a bit of a storyline.
You used different camera angles.

You have probly seen this tutorial before but read it anyway, it will help with everything, i cant stress the word 'everything' enough.

http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=22662

Then look at this, it contains some of the best tutorials on DD concerning many different things.

http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?f=36&t=7164

And here is a link to some other really great pivot tutorials. They are mostly shown in .swf format so they are interactive.

http://www.darkdemon.org/viewtopic.php?t=22459&start=0

Good luck improving. Remember to stay patient, and put effort into everything you make. Enjoy your stay at Sp.
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Jul 19, 2009 12:40 PM #462896
k ill read tutorials...
btw is this fine?
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Jul 19, 2009 12:46 PM #462898
Very jittery and the front leg is stiff. I see you attempted easing, its 'ok' but the jitters detract from it and make it harder to judge.
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Jul 19, 2009 3:50 PM #462942
don't know if anybody cares or not, but I'm leaving for dark demon. this thread has lost most of its dignity.
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Jul 19, 2009 4:54 PM #462961
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don't know if anybody cares or not, but I'm leaving for dark demon. this thread has lost most of its dignity.


Have fun, but I know your going to come back here, dark demon has a more complex forum than here, I think
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Jul 19, 2009 5:45 PM #462985
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don't know if anybody cares or not, but I'm leaving for dark demon. this thread has lost most of its dignity.


Lol another backs out for DD. Can't handle the pressure of this forum, I understand.
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Jul 19, 2009 5:47 PM #462986
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k ill read tutorials...
btw is this fine?
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Alot better from your previous, I can tell you atleast tried to ease. Make a fighting one, you may be ready to leave the Beg seciton.

Edit: Totally forgot I double posted, but I dont really care.
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