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Sep 6, 2009 7:19 PM #484498
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Nope. You did the punch in two frames after. If you did it in just one, then yeah you would have had it better.

alrite, i changed it... i still dont understand how u spotted that lol....
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Sep 6, 2009 10:58 PM #484580
?????wheres the animation and has any1 seen Zed he has been gone for a while now
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Sep 7, 2009 12:10 PM #484826
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http://cache3.asset-cache.net/xc/10078633.jpg?v=1&c=NewsMaker&k=2&d=449109E24F92386BC397BAA5D9791D6A5C4940990DC260D0
O.o i guess....?

anyway, i did a punch test, and yeah the slow part was suppose to be a slow motion thingy... i kno it didnt come out so good so i guess ill stop doing effects until i get better... so yeah, here it is
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His front (after the punch back) leg slides a bit. Without the slow-mo effect it wouldn't be so noticable.
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Sep 7, 2009 12:47 PM #484843
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lolwut? LAWL!!!!!!! People who can't read deserve reactions like that....
I found it pretty funny while I was posting....btw, you just reacted the same way I did, but torwards me.... good fight though xD


Actually not. They deserve an explanation.
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Sep 7, 2009 2:00 PM #484850
so1 is going to end up banned again
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Sep 7, 2009 3:36 PM #484878
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Tried a walk with a stick I got from DROIDZ. Please CC.
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Sep 7, 2009 3:43 PM #484881
Don't just throw together something that took zero effort at all and expect to get good C&C.
Either way, you had no easing at all, and even though your feet just slided on the ground the whole time, one of them bend forward and go through the floor.
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Sep 7, 2009 9:13 PM #485069
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?????wheres the animation and has any1 seen Zed he has been gone for a while now


Honey, I'm home!

I went to Glasgow for the weekend. Saterday night + full moon + Scottish international home game a mile and a half down the road + English accent = one helluvan experience. Anyway, did I miss anything important in here? I can't be bothered to check through the pages.

On the walk @roninja: slow down a bit and loosen up. Raise the back foot more and have the upper leg on it's way back as the lower leg is still extending.
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Sep 8, 2009 12:29 AM #485099
did you ever see my kick zed oh and wb here it is again
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Sep 8, 2009 12:30 AM #485100
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I went to Glasgow for the weekend. Saterday night + full moon + Scottish international home game a mile and a half down the road + English accent = one helluvan experience. Anyway, did I miss anything important in here? I can't be bothered to check through the pages.

lol zed, where havent you been

@kingsmash, you've improved by alot, but the kick is shaky as hell, its not stiff though ^_^, but the feet slide everywhere, has nice force, but the tremors make it look retarded, its up and down, not just up, and the tremors are used too much in there
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Sep 8, 2009 1:19 AM #485114
up and down?isnt that what i did and how can it still be shakey?
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Sep 8, 2009 4:49 AM #485154
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Honey, I'm home!

I went to Glasgow for the weekend. Saterday night + full moon + Scottish international home game a mile and a half down the road + English accent = one helluvan experience. Anyway, did I miss anything important in here? I can't be bothered to check through the pages.

On the walk @roninja: slow down a bit and loosen up. Raise the back foot more and have the upper leg on it's way back as the lower leg is still extending.


Wb =\, I did that loop walk I was trying to do... some guy miss read my post and started to QQ... thats not the point, I acually did the walk, but badly.... I dun care though.. i still did it lol

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Actually not. They deserve an explanation.


I did explain it captain obvious.... lol ._.
in a diffrent manner... and if he tells me to get laid before he even reads something, trust me... he deserves that kind of reaction...
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Sep 8, 2009 5:18 PM #485281
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lol zed, where havent you been


Never crossed the Atlantic. I'm not setting foot in that God forsaken hell hole.

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did you ever see my kick zed oh and wb here it is again
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Like ps21 says, you've improved hugely. I'd say you don't need the tremour when the foot comes down unless you shift the weight of the upper body forward to make it more of a stamp. You need to watch your foot placement too. Beautifully consistant though the slide was, it didn't look intentional.

Great work on the force and movements. The only criticism I have there is the force on the body. It would be difficult to explain without a diagram but basically since every action has an equal and opposite reaction his body is being pushed backwards by both his arms and his legs. When I make a kick I put the arms in front first and then pull them back so that the two balance out more. There's one I made earlier somewhere that I'll pull up so you can see what I mean.

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I hate the stick and it's a very short, rushed animation where I should have fallen more onto the front leg than I did but hopefully you see my point.
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Sep 8, 2009 5:26 PM #485282
I don't know why, but it didn't seem right ._.
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Sep 8, 2009 5:29 PM #485283
It's a poor animation on my part. The arms held out in front are unnatural. Kicking straight from the floor is bad. The momentum of the stick's head and body are poor to say the least.

But the logo's nice, right?

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