here is the improved version of my animation please tell me how it looks
i can't find out how to make it so that the video is able to be watched directly on this post so i am still gonna have to post the link sorry please tell me how to do it. (by the way the animation is to big so i can't upload it on this post)

When you upload the image there are two boxes. One of them is labelled "direct link". That is the link you copy. You need to work on all your movements, easing, and the basics.

ok i tried topay attention to the legs zed i think i got it this time
You need to smooth up the slide so that it moves backwards exactly the same amount each frame. You also need to not move the hips forward
at all. Then straighten out the leg that's on the ground and smooth it up and you're just about there.
Lol, no that's my sig...I was talking about the post I did a while ago. No one really replied to it:

Pretty good really. It seemed a bit stiff though, and quite choppy although the frame rate didn't look wrong, almost as though you were double framing everything. He needed to bend more before the jump too, but asied from that I thought it was good.
Alrite, Heres a "More effort put into" walk attempt then the one with the pokeball
(I kno the back is stiff, but everytime I try fixing up my animations, I make it worse then what it already was)

I wouldn't worry too much about the back. Just bend it over slightly and leave it there for the duration. I think you need to start bringing the upper leg back earlier and you need to extend the lower leg out further, but the arms looked very good.