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Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Jan 26, 2010 9:38 AM #540796
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Lol what happend there? I would say not to use the default stick, but if you did it on purpose.. then that's something else.
I think you should have moved the back more, also, the right arm moved too fast to the left side, and the back leg got a little jamed in the 2nd kick. It would also be nice if you moved the head a little bit too.
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Jan 26, 2010 10:16 AM #540804
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Jan 26, 2010 10:32 AM #540811
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Alot better, it is very well eased. But as I said before, The back and head are stiff :\ Besides that It was very nice.
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Jan 26, 2010 10:46 AM #540815
thanks, I'll try to work on the back and head but now I'm going to bed! It's two in the morning...
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Jan 26, 2010 5:08 PM #540858
@vendetta, PS21 was being a high beginner, THAT'S what he was doing in the Beginner's section...
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Jan 26, 2010 5:51 PM #540864
Oh no.... it appears that my latest visit to the begginers thread seems to have revealed that a lot of people have succeeded my abilitys at pivot who previously before did not. Before you know it, grimreaper, the nightmare, and dbr13 (if he's allready not better than me) will be.

All well. I don't mind people improving.
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Jan 26, 2010 7:04 PM #540879
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That's because Arch-Angel is a self centered guy who thinks his animations are the best, and he doesn't give good CnC. He has to have insults in his posts, if you haven't noticed.


Arch angel gives one of the best advices around in the flash section besides tawnik, he explains them very well and also very clearly. What you do is MOSTLY like this: "stiff, choppy, work on easing". Not really step by step saying as of where and HOW to do that. Arch does say that.

Also, I think i'm quite.. "good" at animating, I understand the basics well. Zed isn't a the god of the beginners section. Get that out of your mind. I don't see what the problem is with helping people, I have helped lots of people in this thread.

Zed is indeed not the god of beginners, he just merely helps out a lot more and a lot better then the most here do.

The problem you make by helping ppl is that you don't do it good. You did listen to Tawnik, but to arch, wich gave freaking good advice and the same, you said fag. That's probably why ppl hate you around here. To the ppl who post outside the beginners just once you yell at them for being noobish. How does that help them?



I do believe I'm done.
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Jan 26, 2010 7:16 PM #540882
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Some test i made to try punching and a jump. Jeez i need to work on jumping.
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Jan 26, 2010 8:46 PM #540905
Try to loosen stuff up more. You just about know what you want the movements to be but you need to make everything loose and smooth for it to look right. Also, try to keep the feet still on the floor. In general, if the feet are sliding around you probably have the movement wrong. Lastly, don't be afraid to space a bit heavier. he only really needs to spend a few frames going up, and most of the distance should be covered in the first frame after he leaves the ground.
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Jan 26, 2010 10:29 PM #540934
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the apple collab finished?
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Jan 26, 2010 10:50 PM #540942
Look out for it at the start of February. I'll post a link to it in the thread as soon as it's done.
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Jan 27, 2010 2:03 AM #540993
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C&C Please

It's not done yet but I would like an opinion on it
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Jan 27, 2010 2:41 AM #541000
I want that Tree stick O.O

I want that whole Dead lookin background O.O
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Jan 27, 2010 5:43 AM #541025
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C&C Please

It's not done yet but I would like an opinion on it


Truthfully i think it could have been better.

First off there doesn't seem to be any acceleration leading into the run he just sort of starts running at a constant speed. Sort of like easing but on a larger scale.

Second off the push could use a little more anticipation, probably lean the back a bit farther backwards, that's about it on anticipation

And third off i don't know how to explain it or what exactly is wrong with it but his legs when he pushes the other guy just stop and look very unnatural
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