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Feb 6, 2010 2:27 PM #544166
I dont really like making my own thread for one animation...
So ill try to update this one :3
Ive only made one animation and I cant find my old thread :T
(and I really dont want to >.>)
SO
Ill use this one.
It's marks thread because it's my real name and Moch12 is getting on my nerves

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Ill update this bad boy Everay day :3
I just need some comments first >.>

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To see my progress flip through the pages : p it gets better
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Feb 6, 2010 2:39 PM #544170
Nice. good easing. :D
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Feb 6, 2010 5:06 PM #544210
Come on people More Comments :T
sheesh....
Ill update in a few minutes....maybe a half an hour
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Feb 6, 2010 5:08 PM #544212
All the individual people move well, but it's sometimes hard to see how they fit together, eg. when the guy kicks forwards and a guy slightly behind him falls over.
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Feb 6, 2010 5:16 PM #544217
looks pretty good.

Try something with better stickmen.
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Feb 8, 2010 3:38 AM #544718
Update!!!:
I wanted to base this off of Crono's run and his MPJ entry.......But that's impossibe xD
But I tried.
His is very well eased :T
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FEATURING THE STICK I MADE!!!!!!
His Name Is Mark........
Never wouldve guesed that huh?

ANOTHER UPDATE!!!!!!
Im bored as hell....
Still no new comments :T
The gravity is super heavy in this animation.
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I dont think ive animatied like this befo
Well I might as well make somethin actiony.
But that shall be latez
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Feb 8, 2010 3:19 PM #544831
Look's very good.

But you overease your animations.

Try spacing them a bit.
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Feb 8, 2010 9:27 PM #544937
K .
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Feb 9, 2010 10:23 PM #545298
Not bad, loosen up your guys movment hes too up-tight.
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Feb 12, 2010 4:04 AM #546158
The one with the green background is by far the best in my opinion. In the first one, I don't get why he kicks his leg out when he elbows the second guy. The second I have no comment on because I haven't seen the work you were basing it off of.
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Feb 13, 2010 7:56 PM #546516
:Update:
This doesnt look right.
Probaby de nek
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Feb 13, 2010 8:04 PM #546518
Nice effect, Love it.
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Feb 17, 2010 2:23 PM #547961
But dude , I am commenting you on msn.
So there is not reason for me to comment you in your own thread again. =)
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Feb 17, 2010 4:46 PM #548000
Ooh, an update that I missed.

It's looking a very ASOT style, which is good. I'd say you undereased the arm that went back first as it started to go forwards again by one frame. Edit: no, wait, just as it finishes going backwards. That's where ya want the frame.

Also, when he was vaporised there was nothing coming off the arms. I'd say, rather than adding a new vapour there, the best way to fix it would be to have the vapour at the end coming in to the middle more for a couple of frames. Like this (but loads better):

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Other than those points, which are very minor, it's looking really good.
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Feb 17, 2010 5:41 PM #548013
I love it moch, i love every bit. thier awsome. They are very awsome and you've gotton very good, VERY good.
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