I do have a critique set up though...
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Limitless Light Constructs: This is a little confusing. He can create any type of weapon?
*Venox swept in towards Murphy’s unprotected flank. The enemy’s focus was on Nightwing…now was his chance!
*Murphy turned and pulled out an energy sword (Halo reference).
*Venox: “O.O”
(Obliteration noises)
See what I mean? It’s fine for you to make some weapons, but just remember to put a limit on the types or amount of them. Otherwise we’ll end up with a character that can get OP real fast.
Ultimate Weakness, PROJECTILES: So…what if the enemies pick up, say, a whole bunch of rocks (no, even better…pillows) and throw them as hard as they can at the light weapons and/or clones. Would they break, flicker, explode, dull…? What would happen?
Any projectile can wreck the clones/weapons? What if Murphy faces enemies with guns? Bullets are projectiles too. Technically, all fist sized objects, one-handed weapons, anything that can be thrown (or affected by gravity) could be deemed as a “projectile.” If something explodes near Murphy, would the fragments pose a threat to his weapons or clones?
In summary, a projectile is: “A fired, thrown, or otherwise propelled object, such as a bullet, having no capacity for self-propulsion.”
Heh, might have messed up somewhere with that. Not good at physics lol. But I’m sure you get my meaning. :)
Tiring Transformation: Once Murphy releases his solar flare attack, how would he feel afterwards? Would he be so weak that he wouldn’t be able to attack if he wanted to? What effects would he suffer (e.g. dizziness, paralysis, light-headedness, pounding headache etc.)? Would these effects be similar, different, or exactly the same after reverting back to human form normally from his morph?
Flesh, blood, and light: I’m guessing Murphy doesn’t fight a lot in human form, but if he does, what are his weaknesses then? Normal human weakness (bleed, burn, bone-breaks, bruises), or a special type weakness (resists light element, weak to fire/water/earth/air/darkness etc.). Does his “solid light” morph have a weakness? If it is made of solid light, do physical attacks pass right through it or cause damage to it? If so, in what way is the morph affected?
Playing Kurt the Nightcrawler: Specify the teleportation limits. Does he just think of a location and then he’d be there? Does he have to see where he wants to go? If Murphy aligns with my first guess, it would be pretty dangerous to think of anything before teleportation (e.g. I wonder how LOTR’s Mount Doom looks like from above, *poof* oops) XD. Does Murphy get confused before or after teleportation? Why does speed-of-light travel and teleportation mess him up? Don’t both abilities feel different to Murphy?
Ultimate Power: He can control anything that emits light? That would make me think…wow, keep the moon and the sun away from Murphy at all times! Lol, what about the Northern Lights? Cars, buildings, flashlights, even lightning, give off some sort of glow. Venox and Nightwing’s eyes also glow red, so would he be able to control them too? Isn’t Nightwing’s spark breath attack something that emits light?
You hold light like this…: If Murphy creates light weapons, how does it happen? Do the weapons pop into existence before him? Do they appear in his hands? If they only solidify if Murphy holds them, do they turn back into light if they are knocked from his hands or remain hard? If they turn to light, do they just fall through the ground and vanish?
With no light comes absence of sight: If Murphy creates darkness for 10 seconds, would he be affected by it? How far away does the target have to be to be affected? Does it affect a radius around Murphy or fill up a narrow area before him? Does he have to see to aim it or is it a, “I-sense-you-behind-me-BLAM” type of thing? If he makes the darkness, does he get blinded too if he walks into it?
Solid burns: Murphy jacks up the heat of his weapons…and promptly burns his hands off. What? He can only use hot weapons in his morph form? :P Is that how it is? If he holds the weapons and heats them up while in human form, does that mean he’s invincible to the burn but the enemy isn’t? How is that possible? I don’t really get how he’s able to “heat his weapons with saturated heat from his laser.” Please explain! Also, if he takes heat from his laser, the laser takes up his strength, so what effect would that have on his ability to hold or control the weapon itself? He may just need a short moment of peace during combat to charge his weapon up, but then that’d probably leave him vulnerable to other attacks (if he gets weak after laser use).
Ambience Existence: What’s Murphy’s range of light manipulation? Can he control any type he can see? Perhaps seize a ray of sunlight and use it as a sword or something like that? If light pools in a certain area, can he grab that physically and throw it like a Frisbee? Is light weightless to him or does it have a certain weight if there is more of it around than a few sparkly areas? As for mental control, if Venox would be dumb enough to attack Murphy in a snowy area, does that mean Murphy would be able to tell all that light reflecting off the snow to attack his opponent?
Behold Me 1, 2, 3, 4…: Okay. Three accurate versions of himself. Does that mean these three have all his abilities? If so, we’d have all three of them being able to also clone themselves, and those clones would be able to clone themselves, and then the clones of those ones…well you get the idea XD. He’d have an army of duplicates. If his morph form has his normal form’s abilities too, does that mean it can make three versions of itself as well?
This CNC was based off the earlier message you sent me about your gladiator's abilities. I may not have been able to understand all of it correctly, but these are just my thoughts. :D
Good luck, challenger!