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Dec 10, 2007 1:38 AM #71275
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Dark, use the onion skin tool. And redraw each frame.

I do use the onion skin tool.
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I don't know if I have a smoothing tool though..


Soul, the kick itself wasn't that bad. It was the fact that the leg stretches out and unrolls like a whip.
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Dec 10, 2007 2:10 AM #71281
first animation plz comment http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=4426
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Dec 10, 2007 2:11 AM #71282
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that wasnt to bad....i dont like ur style tho but that is just my opinion.....umm decently smooth......wobbly as **** tho (lol **** is wobbly? oh well)
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Dec 10, 2007 3:37 AM #71290
Any more comments for me? I really want to get better :Smile: Heres my animation once more http://antiup.net/view.php?id=4395.
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Dec 10, 2007 3:58 AM #71291
the only thing i liked about that animation was the explosion. i thought it was ok. needs work on resizing(little) and smoothness and anticipation

ps: what do u think about my avitar? lol i know it sucks.
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Dec 10, 2007 4:12 AM #71293
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Any more comments for me? I really want to get better :Smile: Heres my animation once more http://antiup.net/view.php?id=4395.


Okay here we go...

Well First off we need anticipation and easing...Alot of easing and the choppyness can be fixed by using the onion skin tool properly and maybe the grid so it doesn't resize if you need more help pm me.

Love your avatar Mrazn
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Dec 10, 2007 5:59 AM #71304
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Okay here we go...

Well First off we need anticipation and easing...Alot of easing and the choppyness can be fixed by using the onion skin tool properly and maybe the grid so it doesn't resize if you need more help pm me.

Love your avatar Mrazn

Ok thanks a ton, I might PM you if I run into anything, hopefully I will get better fast :Smile: . Oh and, love the avatar, still cant figure out how to get my animated one up but maybe I will soon lol
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Dec 10, 2007 5:57 PM #71324
who wants to make some anims (fights for instance) with me?

ICQ: 381-979-690

if you have got msn... i have some problems with it ... works strange on vista.. would be great if you can dl icq

please inform me if youre interested

-karthago
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Dec 10, 2007 6:06 PM #71327
http://www.swfme.com/view/1163142


most recent flash it was for the smash comp.....bonus for randomness lol

CC please
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Dec 10, 2007 6:56 PM #71329
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first animation plz comment http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=4426

wasnt much animation there.
choppy,no physics

Keap practising
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Dec 10, 2007 7:22 PM #71330
hm... that means nobody wants...

[SIZE="5"]Please comment this:[/SIZE]
http://www.swfme.com/view/1004702

see and see
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Dec 10, 2007 7:33 PM #71332
The slo-mo looked a little messed up. He should still be gradually moving, but instead you made him stop completely, and moved him a few centimeters, and then slash him. Other than that, great animation.
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Dec 10, 2007 7:36 PM #71334


Well, it's not so good. But I was actually just interested in what I'm better with : line or brush?
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Dec 10, 2007 7:39 PM #71335
thanks dark but i wanted the slowmo to be like that... cai? could you please comment mine? i personally need you to comment my videos ^^

hm.. that line think looked weird.. the knees changed place... i would say you should stay at brushanimating... i will,too
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Dec 10, 2007 7:39 PM #71336
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Well, it's not so good. But I was actually just interested in what I'm better with : line or brush?


I'd say brush .
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