Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Oct 3, 2009 12:54 PM #495221

Quote from RazrBlade
At your level, work on basics. Like walking.

Uh, needs easing.

And when he cleaves him in half you want to make it horizontally mirrored.
Look at Cronos's explosions animations, he vertically mirrors it, the explosion that's on the bottom doesn't merge with the one on the top.

I didn't really know what you meant by horizontally mirrored but I assumed you meant when both of the guy's body parts were falling so here is the improved version. I also worked on the walking please comment.

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Oct 3, 2009 1:17 PM #495228

God doesn't like this stickfigure.

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Oct 3, 2009 2:19 PM #495232

So why did you animate it ?
It's fine, but lacks force.

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Oct 3, 2009 2:27 PM #495237

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So why did you animate it ?
It's fine, but lacks force.

same reasone I always animate things...... fun:Smile: :Happy: :Spiderman: :Undercover: :Phew:

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Oct 3, 2009 4:56 PM #495279

That's a very good animation. Be proud of it. It does lack a little force though, like Avian said. You could try cutting out a frame before impact in each case or adding a tremour effect. Or both.

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Oct 3, 2009 6:30 PM #495325

This any better?

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Oct 3, 2009 7:34 PM #495345

Quote from Avian
*one of the normal animators*

K thanks ghost, but avian, how's my animation?

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Oct 3, 2009 9:39 PM #495396

Hey I just noticed.... not only did you post an EZtoons animation on the pivot forum, but your animation looks kind of similar to mine!!

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Oct 3, 2009 10:27 PM #495427

another pcson animation i made please give me some criticism

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Oct 3, 2009 10:34 PM #495436

i know all animation stuff al ready so i dont need any traning

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Oct 3, 2009 10:51 PM #495443

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i know all animation stuff al ready so i dont need any traning

Thats great news...

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Oct 3, 2009 11:44 PM #495463

Hey, here is a little kick animation i made....

Please cc and comment

This is the first animation i've made in a while, so....

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Oct 4, 2009 12:58 AM #495490

hows this for gravity test :) coment please

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Oct 4, 2009 3:39 AM #495588

hope u like it !!!! wheres it at?

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Oct 4, 2009 3:42 AM #495591

Did you draw that?

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i know all animation stuff al ready so i dont need any traning

I cant tell you how wrong you are.